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The World of Sheol |
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‘Vengeance’ screamed out in his mind, as if he and it were lovers locked in a climactic, animal embrace of passion. Fury, in that moment, was his all, and he prayed silently that it would never end, for when it did - he knew - he would have to mourn just as wildly. And thus he held faster still to the sweet taste of overwhelming, burning, fervent rage. In that tranquil world of pure, unblemished fury, he became a god. Not one of the gods that the people of Ryadell worshipped from afar, that never showed their faces, ‘nor their miracles. No, he became a god in judgement. Face to face with his subjects, and most of them became horror-struck, seeking desperately to flee or to beg for their lives as their god-made-flesh rampaged amongst them. The look on his face was inhuman. The speed of his sword arm was like the blurred thrashing of a hummingbird’s wings. There was no stopping him. An arrow passed close to his eyes and seemed to slow to a stop before falling away to the ground. A sword came at him from another place, flashing dawning sunlight into his bloodshot eyes, which streamed openly with tears of both wrath and grief alike. But the sword struck thin air and rattled. He turned it away with a blink, and watched helplessly as he run the assailant through, yanking the soldier towards him, even as he felt the flimsy spine give way under his inhumanly strong thrust. He snarled, hating this stranger - hating even the smell of his hair as he pulled him close, hating the way the man twitched and gasped. He twisted his blade and wrenched it free, enjoying the fact that he had brought an end to such a despicable wretch." (The Hunter falls, excerpt from chapter 1 of The Science of Magic: Volume 2.) |
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