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The Science of Magic: Volume 1 |
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His bandaged head was pale and thin. He hadn’t been eating. He hadn’t been sleeping. His family were gone. They were all dead. He repeated the words over and over in his head until he thought his mind might slip away into insanity. At night the words thumped against the inside of his temples; they bled from his eyes, wetting his pillow. Those dirty, dirty words. He didn’t want to believe them. Denial, he clung to desperately, like a grieving mother clinging to the limp, cold corpse of her lifeless child. But he knew … logic prevailed, even his feelings prevailed. He knew the truth; they were all dead, and he would never see any of them again. They were simply gone. And he never got to say goodbye. He had tried going back to Tunlan; tried finding his Brother again using his magic. But he wasn’t there. In fact, nobody he recognised was there. There were hundreds of unknown souls, consciousnesses that he simply had never encountered, lending truth to the rumours. Tears would have come, but he was dry, his tears were exhausted. The sorrow remained, but it sat now like a deep hunger in the pit of his stomach, eating away at him. (Driven to murder, excerpt from chapter 16 of The Science of Magic: Volume 1.) |
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